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題目
Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion.

Positive Influence
1. TS: State your stand
2. R1:Positive influence: focus on the main function of TV:
(2.1) dissemination of information and knowledge
(2.2) entertainment
3. R2:Negative influence (just mention)
4. Conclusion

Negative Influence
1. TS: State your stand
2. R1:Positive influence (just mention)
3. R2:Negative influence
(3.1) Lack of censorship--bad TV program--influence social ideology
(3.2) Make people lazy/unhealthy
4. Conclusion

範例一(Positive Influence)
In my view, I believe that television has had a positive influence on society. 
在我看來，我相信電視對社會有著正面的影響。
First of all, TV programs offer the audience a convenient way to know more about the outside world.
首先，電視節目讓觀眾方便了解更多的外界。
For example, from travel channel, we can perceive how foreigners live and what food they eat.
舉例來說，從旅遊頻道中，我們可以得知外國人如何生活以及所吃的食物。
Furthermore, some programs are very beneficial.
此外，有些節目非常有益。
For instance, when young children watching Discovery channel, they can learn much knowledge about the nature.
舉例來說，當兒童看探索頻道時，他們可以學到很多關於自然的知識。
That's why I totally believe that television has had a positive influence on society.
這就是我為何完全相信電視對社會有著正面的影響。

範例二(Negative Influence)
In my opinion, unfortunately, television has had much more negative influence on society than positive ones.
在我看來，不幸的是電視對社會的負面影響遠超過正面影響。
Despite the fact that TV has kept us entertained, there are many negative elements that have infiltrated into our daily life via TV.
儘管電視讓我們樂在其中，但仍有許多負面因素通過電視滲透到我們的日常生活中。
For example, the modern Cinderella stories have created many money-worshiping young ladies who dream to marry rich guys and enjoy all the luxuries in the world.
例如，灰姑娘的故事造就了許多崇尚金錢的年輕女士，她們夢想著嫁給有錢人，享受世界上所有的奢侈品。
Uncensored TV programs with violent and sexual content can misguide teenagers who are very susceptible to those detrimental influences.
未經審查的暴力和色情內容的電視節目可能會誤導那些容易受到不利影響的青少年。
Besides, long time watching TV will negatively affect our eyesight and health.
此外，長時間看電視會對我們的視力和健康造成負面影響。
It has become the contributing factor for many illnesses like obesity, especially in the more developed countries.
它已成為肥胖等許多疾病的成因，特別是在較發達國家。