題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
思考方向
範文一(317 words)
I would agree with the statement that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are crucial as well as classes and libraries and should receive financial support.
我同意這樣的說法，在大學中，體育和社交活動的重要程度與課堂和圖書館是一樣，並且應該得到財政支持。
I have three reasons to support the above statement.
我有三個理由支持上述的說法。
Firstly, sports or social activities enable students to learn how to communicate with others, which is difficult to experience when we take lessons at classes.
首先，體育或社交活動使學生能購學習如何與他人溝通，這從課堂中是很難體會到的。
In my opinion, the effective way of communication with others is required after graduating from universities.
在我看來，大學畢業後，需要有效的溝通方法。
In my experience, I have been working as a sales for financial product in investment banking company since I graduated from my university.
據我的經驗來說，自大學畢業以來，我一直在證券機構裡從事金融商品的銷售工作。
I strongly feel that communication with my client as well as internal colleagues is a clue to success in the business situation because gaining support from my client and colleagues by the way of communication is critical.
我強烈認為與客戶以及內部同事的溝通是在商業環境中取得成功的線索，因為通過溝通方式獲得客戶和同事的支持是至關重要的。
Secondly, by belonging to sports club, students can learn the mentality to compete with others, which is useful in the business situation as well.
第二點，透過參加運動社團，學生能夠學習與他人競爭的心態，這對商業環境來說同樣有用。
In the business area, making a profit is a top priority, which is partly caused by individual employee's passion to compete with each other.
在商業領域上，賺取利潤是最重要的事，部分原因在於員工相互競爭的熱情所致。
Competition is imperative not only in the business area, but also in the sports, which gives students opportunities to learn it even during their youth age.
競爭不僅在商業領域，在體育方面也是必不可少的，這提供了機會讓學生在年輕時學習競爭。209
Lastly, students who belong to the sports or social club need to be financially supported because it generally puts a costly burden on students.
最後一點，屬於體育或社交社團的學生需要經濟上的支持，因為這通常會給學生帶來沉重的負擔。
For example, I need to buy a sports-wear, shoes and soccer ball as well as the membership payment when I was in a soccer team of the college.
舉例來說，當我在大學的足球隊時，我需要購買球衣、球鞋、足球和隊費。
Even though I was in a public-owned college, that of which tuition fee is quite cheap in Japan, being in a sports club is much more costly than taking lessons.
即使我就讀於在日本學費相對便宜的公立大學，但體育社團的花費還是遠高於課業。
From this experience, it is necessary to financially help students in the sports or social club.
從這個經驗來說，有必要在經濟上幫助體育社團的學生。
From the reasons above, I would agree with the statement that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities have the same importance as classes and libraries and need to receive equal financial support.
從以上的理由，我同意這個說法，在大學中，體育和社交活動的重要程度與課堂和圖書館是一樣的，並且應該得到相同的經濟支持。
範文二(362 words)
Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of sports and social activities should receive financial support.
當談到體育和社交活動是否應該得到財政支持的問題時，人們的意見相當不同。
Some claim that students should fully concentrate on study, while others think that campus lives should not only contain learning knowledge but also sports and social activities.
有些人聲稱學生應該全神貫注在學習上，其他人則認為校園生活不僅應包含學習知識，還應包含體育和社交活動。
In my opinion, I am totally agree with the later statement, the reasons will illustrated in the following paragraphs.
在我看來，我完全同意後面的說法，其原因將在以下段落中說明。
The first reason supporting the statement is that learning knowledge contributes students to getting the future jobs; however, the jobs also need other abilities, such as communication skills.
支持該說法的第一個理由是，學習知識有助於學生獲得未來的工作；然而工作還需要其他的能力，例如溝通技巧。
Take my friend's experience for example, when he just graduated from college, he did not know how to communicate with his co-workers that causing he usually did his jobs in vain in projects.
以我朋友的例子來說，當他剛從大學畢業時，他不知道如何與同事溝通，這導致他常常在專案中做白工。
Therefore, students should join social activities positive when they are still at the school.
因此，學生在校時應該積極地參加社交活動。
The second reason sustaining the statement is that sports can keep the health as well as cultivate the spirit of hardworking.
支持該說法的第二個理由是，運動除了可以保持健康，也可以培養刻苦耐勞的精神。
For instance, before I joined the baseball team in junior high school, I was not good at learning.
舉例來說，在我國中加入棒球隊之前，我並不擅長學習。
But through team practice at everyday morning, it let me understand if you want to success, you have to make an effort.
但是透過每天早上的團隊練習，讓我了解如果想要成功，就必須付出努力
Since I know this principle, my academic performance has improved a lot.
自從我知道這個道理後，我的學業成績有了很大的提升。
Thus, joining the sports clubs more or less contribute students to learning.
因此，加入體育社團或多或少有助於學生的學習。
The last reason depending the statement is that students who belong to the sports or social club need to be financially supported because it generally puts a costly burden on students.
支持該說法的最後一個理由是，屬於體育或社交社團的學生需要經濟上的支持，因為這通常會給學生帶來沉重的負擔。
For example, I need to buy a sports-wear, shoes and baseball gloves as well as the membership payment when I was in a baseball team of the college.
舉例來說，當我在大學的棒球隊時，我需要購買球衣、球鞋、足球和隊費。
Even though I was in a public-owned college, that of which tuition fee is quite cheap in Taiwan, being in a sports club is much more costly than taking lessons.
即使我就讀於在日本學費相對便宜的公立大學，但體育社團的花費還是遠高於課業。
From this experience, it is necessary to financially help students in the sports or social club.
從這個經驗來說，有必要在經濟上幫助體育社團的學生。
From the reasons above, I strongly agree with the statement that at universities and colleges, sports and social activities have the same importance as classes and libraries and need to receive equal financial support.
從以上的理由，我堅信這個說法，在大學中，體育和社交活動的重要程度與課堂和圖書館是一樣的，並且應該得到相同的經濟支持。
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