題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
思考方向
- 如今藝人和運動員深受侵犯隱私的困擾。他們也是人，也需要基本的人權，更多的隱私權能減少心理壓力。Ex. 避免被偷拍、跟蹤或毀謗，最後再提到韓國藝人的自殺
- 減少對私生活的關注，能讓他們專注在自己的練習上，然後將最佳的表現展現在大眾面前。
- 家人及朋友也應該受到保護。擁有更多的隱私權讓他們能享受生活。Ex.跟朋友看場電影、陪家人吃頓飯以及與伴侶去旅行。
範例(360 words)
Views differ considerably when it comes to the issue of entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy. Some claim that famous people should have more privacy than they have now, while others argue that famous people should expose their private lives for everyone. As far as I am concerned, the former position that public figures need to have more privacy seems acceptable, and the reasons to support my statement will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.
The first reason supporting the statement is that paying too much attention to famous people would cause some serious problems. With the widespread of the Internet, everyone could easily share everything on social media; however, sometimes it might harm others' right to privacy. For example, in Korea, because of unnecessary attention, some of entertainers are under tangible and intangible pressures for a long period of time. Thus, they are always experience feeling of helplessness and melancholy, even want to die. Obviously, entertainers and athletes should deserve to have more privacy than they have now.
The second reason sustaining the statement is that just like us, public figures also have own daily life as well as hobbies. Without a doubt, they need to do somethings to release their pressures after work such as watching the movie with friends, eating the meal with their family, and going to travel with their partner. For instance, my friend, James, he is a famous baseball player. When he goes to any places, there are always a lot of fans want to take the photo with him. Even though he has not reject any requests one time, it actually make him troubled. Therefore, he cannot truly release his stress.
The last reason depending the statement is that without these unnecessary attention, entertainers and athletes could fully concentrate on their practices and training, and then displaying the best performance on the stage. For entertainers, it may be an excellent movie, while for athletes it may be a brilliant competition.
To sum up, it is not to say other opinions are completely unreasonable. Nevertheless, I believe that the points of view I have provided are fully capable of supporting my statement.
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